Hi Isamar, After studying the analysis documentation of your precedents, I doubt if one can extract the learnings and lessons from the studies. You might want to add text of what parts of the studies are helpful and which you would wish to incorporate in your design and which aspects need to be scrapped. Even the diagrams seem more of program distribution without any visual depiction of function-distribution hierarchy, circulation and the respective effects on the spaces, form and structure of the design. The diagrams merely seem a collection of graphics.
Hi Isamar,
ReplyDeleteAfter studying the analysis documentation of your precedents, I doubt if one can extract the learnings and lessons from the studies. You might want to add text of what parts of the studies are helpful and which you would wish to incorporate in your design and which aspects need to be scrapped. Even the diagrams seem more of program distribution without any visual depiction of function-distribution hierarchy, circulation and the respective effects on the spaces, form and structure of the design. The diagrams merely seem a collection of graphics.